8 October 2008

Release











The tingling sound of fear,
Echoes through her path
From within her depths
A cry for release rise
Release from confusion within and
Turmoil without.

From within her
A muffled sound resounds,
Yeaning to be heard
A sound of familiar pain
A cry for freedom
From clutches that bind.

Alas from with her
Sprung a sound
Pure, sweet and calm
One of joy, hope and victory
A sound that conveys
Belief in the beautify of a dream
And courage in the face of adversity
A sound of encouragement to whoever hears
To dance to the rhythm of
The assurances that is heard in this sound.


© Deboo October 2008.


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12 comments:

Remi, United Kingdom said...

yipeeeeeeee firrrst.. okay back in a bit ... lol

Remi, United Kingdom said...

wow!!!! I could feel the corset of restraint being released as I read this..
I love this bit "Belief in the beautify of a dream
And courage in the face of adversity"

Amazing stuff... welcome back luv.. missed ur posts..hope you're doing good..

lots of luv xx

Jennifer A. said...

Woww...

I loved the progression from fear to one who gives encouragement...that's "growth."

Beautiful...

Rita said...

This is very encouraging dear...and I was so excited to see ur post with a picture once again (the last one did not have)...

Simply lovely...

Rita said...

How have you been?

Anonymous said...

Beautifully written.

Shubby Doo said...

Completely agree with jaycee :)

olusimeon said...

o.k o..since everybody understands it..lemme also act like i totaly understand..i did enjoy the last two verses o..
and i need to upgrade my poetic instincts( is there anything like dat?)
peace

Remi, United Kingdom said...

lol@ simeone's comment :-)))

I don't know if there is anything like poetic instints oh...but update it all the same.

Hey Debs, how u doing girl.. hope u had a good weekend.
x

Straight from the heart said...

Hey Rems,
I am cool had a quite weekend, how far girl. visited your poetry blog page O! we need to yan.

Simone.... I am flattered, thanks for the comment.

Thanks all for the lovely comments.

Flourishing Florida said...

well done, dear. u did some good work with words there. keep it up.



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Rita said...

Don't want to put you under pressure but I am looking forward to your next post...