The tingling sound of fear,
Echoes through her path
From within her depths
A cry for release rise
Release from confusion within and
Turmoil without.
From within her
A muffled sound resounds,
Yeaning to be heard
A sound of familiar pain
A cry for freedom
From clutches that bind.
Alas from with her
Sprung a sound
Pure, sweet and calm
One of joy, hope and victory
A sound that conveys
Belief in the beautify of a dream
And courage in the face of adversity
A sound of encouragement to whoever hears
To dance to the rhythm of
The assurances that is heard in this sound.
© Deboo October 2008.
Pictures by "photobucket"
12 comments:
yipeeeeeeee firrrst.. okay back in a bit ... lol
wow!!!! I could feel the corset of restraint being released as I read this..
I love this bit "Belief in the beautify of a dream
And courage in the face of adversity"
Amazing stuff... welcome back luv.. missed ur posts..hope you're doing good..
lots of luv xx
Woww...
I loved the progression from fear to one who gives encouragement...that's "growth."
Beautiful...
This is very encouraging dear...and I was so excited to see ur post with a picture once again (the last one did not have)...
Simply lovely...
How have you been?
Beautifully written.
Completely agree with jaycee :)
o.k o..since everybody understands it..lemme also act like i totaly understand..i did enjoy the last two verses o..
and i need to upgrade my poetic instincts( is there anything like dat?)
peace
lol@ simeone's comment :-)))
I don't know if there is anything like poetic instints oh...but update it all the same.
Hey Debs, how u doing girl.. hope u had a good weekend.
x
Hey Rems,
I am cool had a quite weekend, how far girl. visited your poetry blog page O! we need to yan.
Simone.... I am flattered, thanks for the comment.
Thanks all for the lovely comments.
well done, dear. u did some good work with words there. keep it up.
"Ruffin' It" is launched. If u haven't been there, follow my link ...
Don't want to put you under pressure but I am looking forward to your next post...
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